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Wednesday 7 August 2013

Little Red Riding Hood


Once upon a time in the middle of the forest there lived a little girl named Little Red Riding Hood. Her mother had given her a basket of cakes to give to her grandma because she was feeling very ill. As Little Red Riding Hood’s  mother waved goodbye from the house door she said “ stay on the path and don’t stop” don’t worry mother I will do as you say! said little red riding hood as she walked deeper into the forest. As she was walking on the path she saw some yummy looking berrys. Little Red Riding hood thought she could stop to pick some to eat she was feeling a bit hungry. So she put the basket down and started to pick the berrys “hmmm” said little red riding hood as she put the berrys in her mouth. After six more berrys wait seven no eight no nine yay nine more berrys she headed off to grandma’s cottge. Then she saw a butterfly and chased it into the forest. She had forgot what her mother had said.




As she chased the butterfly she had notice that she was lost! Then she heard a rustling sound and ran as fast as she could and found the path. But when she turned around she saw sneaking looking eyes but when she blinked they had gone. Then a grumpy voice said little girl where are you going? When little red riding hood heard the voice her heart jumped and said  I am going to give these cakes to my grandma she is sick. Is she alone said the voice yes and she does not talk to strangers. “Who are you” said little red riding hood why I am a kind old wolf Maybe just maybe we will meet again said the wolf and had ran up the path.




“ Ha! I will eat grandma then the little girl what great idea” said the wolf in his mind. The wolf raced ahead of little red riding hood to grandma’s cottage. when he got there he kno
ked on the door and put on a sweet little voice “ grandma it’s me little red riding hood”
then come in come said grandma but to her surprise that the wolf trick her and the first thing that the wolf did was her up and put on her night gown. Then little red riding hood came to the cottage and knocked on the door and said can I come in grandma “yes you may said the wolf trying to sound like her.



When Little Red Riding stepped inside the first thing she said was what big eyes you have said little red riding hood better to see you with replied the wolf “ and what big ears you have”little red riding hood said better to hear you with my dear but what big hands you have better to hug you with said the wolf and what big teeth you have said little red riding said BETTER TO EAT YOU WITH!!!!!! in one mouth full little red riding was eatin. The layed in grandma bed to have a little nap but the cottage hunter came to the cottage for a cup of water he had been trying to catch the wolf who as been very very bad when he walked by the opened window to see if any one was home he saw the wolf! With a full belly sleepy in the bed. Carefully he pointed his gun to the wolfs head and shot and opened up his belly there popped out was grandma and little red riding hood after they thanked the hunter little red riding hoods mother burst though the door and ran to hug her child  she had tears of joy in her eyes. Then they both went home the end.



The moarl of the story is:
Do what your mum and dad tell you.

1 comment:

  1. H lucy your story is really good i think you added enough detail and you relate to the Characters

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