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Tuesday 5 November 2013

The Whisper in The Barn

“Hurry up Kate were going to be late for school” shouted jenny from outside the classroom door they were in room 16. Jenny was waiting for Kate so they could go in together like they always do but this time Kate was late and jenny was very shy she wore classes and had to fish braids in her hair and did not like to be late for class that's why Kate always goes inside with her. There teacher was Mr Harrison he was a very funny man and did not like kids being late all the time. Kate she was a trouble maker and loved to trick other kids like make them look the other way and pour spicy powder on there lunch she was a bad girl. She has one pony tail and hair always comes out of place no matter what you try. She passed room 13 now 14 and she was getting close to 15 and then 16 almost there she thought.



As Kate was running to jenny you could hear what was going on in Kate's bag you could hear stuff crashing into each other and bang into each other again it made lots of noise just like a marching band that was out of tune. "Umm can you pick up the pace I would like to go inside and not get in trouble" said jenny “Don’t worry jenny we won’t get told off this was just the….” last time you two come late and made lots of noise and stopped the whole school from working with that noise I will have to call your parents to sort you two out but Mr Harrison Kate started  that was just my lunch box it’s a one of those metal ones and I also have a metal ruler that’s what the noise was not me look Kate said Mr Harrison softly you got stop coming late if you keep on doing that that might mess up your learning okay said Mr Harrison okay replied Kate.



On the way home Kate was walking by herself  she mostly walks home with jenny but her mum picked her up from school. I don’t think that her mum wants her to play with me any more we are best friends thought Kate but I guess that I'm just not the right person for her to be friends. When she got home she heard a whisper that said come to me child come to me…… then the voice faded and she got the key from under the mat and opened the door and looked around the house no one was home then she heard it again but this time it said I am in the barn come to the barn….. it faded again her family lived on a farm but it was closed so her mum brought so they could live on the farm.



As Kate entered the barn she saw a little girl there and she ran away Kate chased her to find out who she was and shouted come back come back then she lead Kate into a corner and Kate said where did you go the splash a bucket of water fell on her she looked and saw her class mates, her teacher, her mum and even jenny was there then they all came down and helped Kate dry up then she saw the little girl who was jenny little sister Jane was very good at acting because jenny plays pretend with her and then jenny told her that this was all a fake but not getting into trouble and t the kids wanted to find out what happened if they did that to you and you fell for it.




After Kate but on fresh new clothes and dried off jenny told her about the whole thing the whisper was just your mum whispering into the microphone which was part of the speakers that your a dad installed and hide them and we all climbed the ladder to the top and Jane stayed at the bottom and the reason  I had to go was I had to  help Jane get ready and go to your house and the plan was that Jane would lead you here and the class would splash the bucket of water on you. But why would you do that! said Kate well it was just for fun replied jenny what?! said Kate in stoked jenny always had a reason for everything but I guess not today.


2 comments:

  1. Hi Lucy!
    My name is Samantha, and I attend the University of South Alabama. I enjoyed reading The Whisper in the barn. It was very interesting! I seen a couple little errors, but they could be easily fixed. Keep up the good work!

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  2. Hi Lucy
    I enjoyed reading The Whisper in the barn because it really kept me interested. I think you would make a great Writer some day Keep up the good work
    Bye Bye

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