The Maze of Corn edited version

It was a beautiful morning when farmer Mack woke up. He was a very determined man and got all his work done. He loved his family very much and they all lived on a farm in the countryside. His wife was a very creative women and her name was Leila she was a sculptor who loved to make a maze out of corn like that one time when she made a maze out of huge bush’s it took her one whole year and now she is working on her maze of corn. She would wake up very early to do this. They also had two twin daughters that looked just like each other. The oldest was named Mary and the youngest was named Lola. She was only a year younger then Mary. But they liked different things. Mary loved the stars and planets but Lola on the other hand she loved animals and nature.

At the table everyone was waiting for Leila to come and have breakfast “What’s taking mum so long” groaned Lola I'll go and look for her said Mack and went upstairs to check if she was sleeping in but she wasn't there. Then he went outside and went in the maze of bush  to look for her but she was inside the house. She was in the bathroom. She just had a shower to wake her up a bit more and to freshen up. “Where’s your farther?”said Leila with a sigh. Mack always goes out without saying anything. “He went to look for you” replied Mary “yeah I think he went into the maze of  corn” said Lola. Oh no!” cried Leila he doesn't remember how to get out! He’ill be stuck in there forever cried Leila the two girls raced outside to see if there dad went in the maze of corn but he was no where. So he must be inside we can’t find him anywhere else said Mary.

I have a idea! shouted Leila Lola go get me a pair of scissors from the kitchen cried Leila. Lola rushed into the kitchen and grabbed the scissors and ran back outside and gave it to her mum. Leila threw the scissors over the maze of corn and shouted Honey can you hear me! Yelled Leila on the top of her lungs. They waited for a repile then they heard Mack say yes I can hear you! He shouted back to her. Good I threw a pair of scissors that you can use to get out! Yelled Leila great a just need to go look for them shouted dad.

Five days later... I found it I found it! Now I can get out! Mack grabbed the scissors and started cutting. When Leila woke up she saw her husband making breakfast. He put on new clothes and had a shower. When Leila saw him she ran up to him and gave him a huge hug so did the twins they all missed mack and were glad he was back.