The Maze of Corn edited version

It was a beautiful morning when farmer Mack woke up. He was a very determined man and got all his work done. He loved his family very much and they all lived on a farm in the countryside. His wife was a very creative women and her name was Leila she was a sculptor who loved to make a maze out of corn like that one time when she made a maze out of huge bush’s it took her one whole year and now she is working on her maze of corn. She would wake up very early to do this. They also had two twin daughters that looked just like each other. The oldest was named Mary and the youngest was named Lola. She was only a year younger then Mary. But they liked different things. Mary loved the stars and planets but Lola on the other hand she loved animals and nature.

At the table everyone was waiting for Leila to come and have breakfast “What’s taking mum so long” groaned Lola I'll go and look for her said Mack and went upstairs to check if she was sleeping in but she wasn't there. Then he went outside and went in the maze of bush  to look for her but she was inside the house. She was in the bathroom. She just had a shower to wake her up a bit more and to freshen up. “Where’s your farther?”said Leila with a sigh. Mack always goes out without saying anything. “He went to look for you” replied Mary “yeah I think he went into the maze of  corn” said Lola. Oh no!” cried Leila he doesn't remember how to get out! He’ill be stuck in there forever cried Leila the two girls raced outside to see if there dad went in the maze of corn but he was no where. So he must be inside we can’t find him anywhere else said Mary.

I have a idea! shouted Leila Lola go get me a pair of scissors from the kitchen cried Leila. Lola rushed into the kitchen and grabbed the scissors and ran back outside and gave it to her mum. Leila threw the scissors over the maze of corn and shouted Honey can you hear me! Yelled Leila on the top of her lungs. They waited for a repile then they heard Mack say yes I can hear you! He shouted back to her. Good I threw a pair of scissors that you can use to get out! Yelled Leila great a just need to go look for them shouted dad.

Five days later... I found it I found it! Now I can get out! Mack grabbed the scissors and started cutting. When Leila woke up she saw her husband making breakfast. He put on new clothes and had a shower. When Leila saw him she ran up to him and gave him a huge hug so did the twins they all missed mack and were glad he was back.

The Maze Of Corn

It was a beautiful morning when farmer Mack woke up. He was a very determined man. And got all is work done and loved his family very much he also lived on a farm. But his wife was a bit lazy her name was Leila she did the job half done like that one time when she made the a cup of tea and used the milk but she didn't but it back. They also had two twin daughters that looked just like each other. The oldest was named Mary and the youngest was Lola. She was only a year younger then Mary. But even if they look like each other they still liked different things. Like Mary she loved the stars and planets but Lola on the other hand she loved animals and nature.

At the table everyone was waiting for leila to bring breakfast “What’s taking mum so long” groaned lola I'll go and look for her said Mack and went upstairs to check if she was sleeping in but she wasn’t there then he went outside and went in the maze of corn to look for her but inside the house She was in the bathroom. She just had a shower to wake her up a bit more and to freshen up. “Where’s your farther?”said leila with a sigh. Mack always goes out without saying anything. “He went to look for you” repiled mary “yeah I think he went into the maze of corn” said lola.

“Oh no!” cried Leila he doesn't remember how to get out! He’ill be stuck in there forever cried Leila the two girls raced outside to see if there dad went in the maze of corn but he was no where to be found. To be continued. This is My story the edited version is coming soon!! Below is my score.

Making Pizza

Last week on Thursday the Year 5 and 6 Extension group are making pizza for Labour day!! Labour day is a holiday for workers to have a break from work. We learned a lot by reading about Labour. It was first celebrated on the 28 of October on the year of 1840. There were parades that workers could go to have a day off. Lots of businesses were closed for half of the day.


First we planned what we were going to do and find a partner.My partner was  Mary. When we got our pizza base we got our plate and grabbed what we need. We were given grated cheese,green capsicum,pineapple,ham and tomato paste to use for our pizza. The tomato paste went on first. We rushed to get the tomato. We smudged the tomato paste on the pizza.Then we got a huge pile of grated cheese on the plate the we were and put it on the pizza


Then we got a huge pile of grated cheese on the plate the we were and put it on the pizza.We put on eight pieces of ham to show the eight hours of work. It was fun we also got cheese,green capsicum,pineapple,ham and put it on. We were the first to put our pizza in the oven and then we started to write all about it. After all the pizza were baked and ready to eat Collin said a pray. We also got to give some to the teachers. 
 Me and Mary give one to Miss Garden and Mr J. When I tasted it was yummy!. But it was not all about pizza it was about Labour day.

This is our pizza I hope you like it. Please leave some feedback!

Farm Questions

• Who would want to make farm's ?
• Where did the word farm come from ?
• When did farmer's start farming ?
•  What can I do to protect animal's ?
• Why would we protect animal's ?
• How can I become a farmer?
• Which is the most important thing in farming?

Lucy's Minecraft Temple of Zeus

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I hope you like my mine craft adventure. It took me 2 and a half weeks to finish it. p.s sorry I was suposed to say pandora but instead I said dora hahahahah silly me(:

The Mischievous Mermaid

Once upon a time there lived a very mischievous mermaid who lived in the sea with her Mother who loved her so much. The mischievous mermaid’s name was Kate. She always Sneed into to other people house’s and eat there food when they had left. One day when she was walking by a strange  looking house she saw three sharks. The smallest one was their son and the the other’s was the mother and farther. The were going out for a walk to wait for there food to cool down a bit and left the door open.

Then when no one was looking she ran inside the house and shut the door closed and looked around then she saw at the table three bowls of pudding. Kate  took a spoon and tasted the biggest bowl and said “ this pudding is the coldest thing I have ever tasted” then she went to the second biggest bowl “ this is hot I don’t like this.” Then she tried the smallest bowl “ yummy I really like this one its not to hot and not to cold.

After she had finished the smallest bowl she swam into the living room and saw three chairs and sat on the tallest one first she tried to get cozy but it was no use so she swam to the next chair it was the second tallest chair. Kate sat on it and then she started to sink into the chair! “ this chair is to soft I might try the littlest one” so she did and it was the better then the rest but then she heard a big crack then smash kate fell on the floor and the littlest chair smashed into little pieces and ran upstairs to the bedrooms.

There were three beds biggest to smallest. Kate ran up to the small one it looked right for her ranther then going one by one so she climbed in and fell fast asleep. Then when the family of sharks came back from there walk the first thing they notice was the door was wide open and went to check on there pudding “ oh no my someone eat my pudding!” And mine sobbed the littlest shark. Then they went into to the living room to check on there t.v “no my chair can you fix it daddy please!!!  I am sorry son but I don’t think so. let’s go check the bedroom said the mama shark and so they did and saw kate sleeping in little sharks bed. When Kate woke up the first thing she did was run down stairs and out the door and ran back home and never went outside.

Rhyming Couplets

A couplet is a two lines poem or lyric. The last word of each line rhymes.


I went to put on my night gown that was red.
So I could climb into my cozy little purple bed.




One day I gave a fresh carrot.
 To one fancy looking parrot.

When I was climbing a tree.
I saw a  big fat queen bee.