The Maze Of Corn

It was a beautiful morning when farmer Mack woke up. He was a very determined man. And got all is work done and loved his family very much he also lived on a farm. But his wife was a bit lazy her name was Leila she did the job half done like that one time when she made the a cup of tea and used the milk but she didn't but it back. They also had two twin daughters that looked just like each other. The oldest was named Mary and the youngest was Lola. She was only a year younger then Mary. But even if they look like each other they still liked different things. Like Mary she loved the stars and planets but Lola on the other hand she loved animals and nature.

At the table everyone was waiting for leila to bring breakfast “What’s taking mum so long” groaned lola I'll go and look for her said Mack and went upstairs to check if she was sleeping in but she wasn’t there then he went outside and went in the maze of corn to look for her but inside the house She was in the bathroom. She just had a shower to wake her up a bit more and to freshen up. “Where’s your farther?”said leila with a sigh. Mack always goes out without saying anything. “He went to look for you” repiled mary “yeah I think he went into the maze of corn” said lola.

“Oh no!” cried Leila he doesn't remember how to get out! He’ill be stuck in there forever cried Leila the two girls raced outside to see if there dad went in the maze of corn but he was no where to be found. To be continued. This is My story the edited version is coming soon!! Below is my score.