Writing Bush test

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Every picture tells a story.  Use your imagination and experience to narrate (tell) a story about the photo.

Take 5 minutes to plan your writing below.

Plan

T - Walking in the forest

O - Ally a 15 year old girl is very organised and caution. She has Brown straight hair with gemstone green eyes. Ally likes everything to be in order and never leaves home without a first aid kit. She also has a best friend who is also 15 years old. Her name is Tessa who is not at all like Ally because she is very reckless and is very humoruos. Tessa has blond wavy hair with sky blue eyes and loves to eat everything!

P - They get lost while walking through the bush and need to find a way home before Ally loses her MIND!

S - They find the walkie talkie that Tessa lost and use it to call for help and after that the forest ranger finds them and escorts them home safely.

Start your writing here.

It was another normal spring day! The birds were chirping and the sun shone brightly as Ally a 15 year old girl was happily strolling home from school. Ally has brown straight hair and gemstone green eyes. She is a very organised girl and is also very cautions. She loves to learn and also spend time with her auntie Bertha. Ally also has a best friend who is also 15 years old. Her name is Tessa who is not at all like Ally because she is very reckless and is very humorous. Tessa has blond wavy hair with sky blue eyes and loves to eat everything! When Ally arrived to her big yellow house her parents were sitting on the couch watching T.V, “Hi dear how was school?” asked Ally’s mother who looked just like Ally but had hazel nut eyes. Ally set her bag down beside the door “ohh It was just another great day and me and Tessa are going on a hike tomorrow and I know its going to fun! replied Ally. Her mother’s face turned from happy and bright to sad and droopy, “umm sweetheart I don’t think Tessa is a good influence for you I mean she is sweet but you know..” said her mum sadly. Ally ignored her mother and stomped upstairs to her light purple room. Ally flopped onto her bed and thought to herself why her mother thinks Tessa is bad? Tessa is great but she is reckless but Ally didn’t care they had been friends ever since middle school. Ally then thought about their hike tomorrow and she knew that they were going to have a blast!

The next day came faster than lighting and Ally and Tessa were already at the bush. They were so excited and couldn’t wait to start hiking but before they could go they had to read some rules first. “URRGGGH let’s just go already we don’t need to read the rules will be fine!” complained Tessa, Ally did really want to go but she wanted to finish reading the rules but decided that Tessa was right, so off they went. The forest was so beautiful and full with green, The two best friend chatted as they hikied and looked at all the wonderfull things but the great sinery didn’t that long becuase all of a sudden it started pouring down with rain! “Oh no we need to find shelter!” Shouted Ally then Tessa spotted a cave so they ran in and sat down in the cold and damp cave. Ally opened her bag and grapped out to blankets and gave one to Tessa, Ally dug deep into her bag to find the food she packed but they weren’t there! Then Ally looked at Tessa long and hard until “ OKAY OKAY I ate the food, I was hungry okay you know me!” Shouted Tessa sadly the rain poured and poured it was like it wasn’t going to stop. “ I thought it wasn’t suppoused to rain today” said Ally, Tessa reached into her bag and brought out a walkie talkie. “We can use this to call someone” Suggested Tessa as Ally was about to grab the walkie talkie they heard a loud ROAR!!